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Thank you very much! 
I have some things that could be improved, and these are:
1. I feel that the photo is somehow falling backwards slightly. This might be because of the perspective shown, but it seems like it is tipping back.
2. I think that the sky needs some work on. I am not sure whether you overexposed it or what, but it is a weird color of grey.
3. I am not sure what is happening here, with the clouds. You obviously used a long exposure, but the cloud is not blurred. It looks slightly unnatural, that the water is blurred and the sky is not.
A low mark for originality simply because of the blurred water thing (I see it too much).
Overall a fantastic piece. I love it and it has had good impact on me.
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