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Bratislava, Slovakia
"My God, my God, why have you forsaken me? Why are you so far from saving me, so far from my cries of anguish? My God, I cry out by day, but you do not answer, by night, but I find no rest..."
kompozicia velmi dobra,prijemna,farebne tiez ok,napriek teplym farbam,akoby z obrazku isiel chlad-rovnaky pocit vyvolava drevo aj kamenna dlazba..tie hviezdicky napravo,akoze prenikajuceho svetla,no neviem,akosik su moc hviezdnate a nie su na vsetkych miestach,kde by zubate svetlo malo prenikatnaklonena perspektiva pohladu sa mi paci,vyvolava kolisavy pocit-akoby na lodi co by som este viac prepracovala je svetlo,taka ista plasticita obrazku.takto mi pripada svetlo vsade rovnake aj naprik hviezdickam a predpokladanemu vchodu ,ci vychodu "za mnou" aj predo mnou- pri ludskej postave.postavicku by som neumiestnila presne na prechod a skusila by som jej dodat viac dynamiky.pismo,podpis,farba a jednoduchost autogramu je velmi pekne zvoleny-viditelny a pritom nevtierajuci sa pred samotne dielko.
i really like the editing format used here. it works really well. and the perspective...i love it. it's a total twist on linear perspective that enhances the photo. and i love how you incorporated a Psalm into it. good work (:
co by som este viac prepracovala je svetlo,taka ista plasticita obrazku.takto mi pripada svetlo vsade rovnake aj naprik hviezdickam a predpokladanemu vchodu ,ci vychodu "za mnou" aj predo mnou- pri ludskej postave.postavicku by som neumiestnila presne na prechod a skusila by som jej dodat viac dynamiky.pismo,podpis,farba a jednoduchost autogramu je velmi pekne zvoleny-viditelny a pritom nevtierajuci sa pred samotne dielko.
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